Creative Writing: The Foul Threctomy

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I could smell the foul stench of blood from a mile away on reaching there I found it as disturbing as the one in Mumbai. Her hair was stained and discolored when they found her in the t b, and her lungs were choked with water from when he dumped her body into the bathtub. Her face was bruised, covered with great blotches, and three of her ribs had been broken. Her thighs and abdomen had been bruised and lacerated. Her body lay like ghoulish mannequin, the pancreas and intestines were sticking out like so much corrugated and rubber tubing. It looked as if a special effects team had worked over time for some Friday the thirteenth movie set ,but that smell... That smell could only come from recently slaughtered animals. In this case

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