Creative Writing: The Caged Door

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They opened this door and they all walked inside. The last person inside was the boy holding me. He walked inside somewhat slowly, put me and the box that i was in on the floor. At this time i couldn't see anything because my box was pitch black and the only part with light was the cage door and i wasn't facing that way so i couldn't see anything. Someone opened the box and pulled me out of it, was somewhat nervous because this has never happened to me. Once i was out the sweet mom picked me up and started to walk me around. I was surprised because this house was huge and there was so much room for me to play in. She walked me around from room to room, it almost felt endless. A couple of these rooms had big squares just on the ground with …show more content…
After a couple minutes of practicing to jump over the fence i thought i would give it a try. I walked away from the fence, turned around and started to run head first at the fence. At the last second i gave a huge jump pushing with all my force on my back legs. I flew in the air it felt as if i was flying i almost forgot what i was trying to accomplish in the first place. I looked down while i was in mid air and the fence was a whole foot below me. I had jumped the fence, i did it! I landed on the ground on the other side of the fence but my legs absorbed the shock so it was a smooth landing. I looked at my surroundings, it was dark i could see a light in the distance coming from one of the other houses. I walked around to see where i was. It seems as if i am behind the houses by the garage. This place looked really cool and new even though i just arrived at this house. I looked down the long, dark alley which seemed to get darker the farther you looked. I walked in the open alley going to see others peoples garage, just wondering what their house was …show more content…
She was telling me how if these cats herd you or saw you in their turf they would start to fight you. I thought that, that was terrible and that i can't believe other cats would be that men in this nice area. SHe started to tell me that i most likely need to make a name for myself so people won't mess with me. I was kinda confused on whatshe meant by this, i didn't know if she wanted me to fight other cats or what. She said that she runs this place around here and that everyone has a lot of respect for her. She also said that if some cat approaches you that you can say that you are close with Willow. I thinked her for that and we soon went separate ways. I went walking somewhat fast back to my house because by the sounds of it i really didn't want to mess with any other cats. Once i got back to the driveway at my house i felt really relieved because i knew i was safe.i Jumped over the fence again but this time wasn't that significant because i knew that i already could. I stood in the backyard away from all the bad cats and no risk in shock that they could be that mean. My mind was a rollercoaster with thoughts, i didn't know what to

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