Creative Writing: The Beach

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I gripped Winter Stream's saddle tightly. She looked down at the Swirling waves below.
She knew that if she fell, it would be the death of her. She shook the thought away and looked ahead. Fog was swirling just beyond a sea stack close by, blocking her view of the islands that were nearby. The expedition was about to start and everyone was anxious.
I looked over to Flower and she signaled and to begin the expedition. Everyone took off in the direction of the sea stack ahead. I followed cautiously. As we entered the fog Winter Stream tensed and managed a low growl. I looked around, but Winter Stream's voice interrupted my thoughts. "Turn back! I can sense something wrong. A-A disturbance in the fog!" Winter Stream warned. "Winter Stream,
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She was plunging down into the water. My eyes widened and I felt icy claws grip my heart. I dove down after her. and saw her hit the water with a splash. My heart fluttered and I dove into the water after her. I swam and swam, but finally lost sight of her. She was gone. Ripped away by the swirling grey water.
Anger flooded through my heart. Then I remembered.
The two Elemental Aquaborealis, Sol and Lucian. They could help, and if they didn't? She would force them to. She swam to the surface and took off. She bolted off in the direction off in the direction of which she last had seen them.
She flew so fast that even the fast falling rain seemed to slow.
Ginger's life was on the line and she could not risk it. She finally got sight of an island and took a closer look. There. I saw two Aquaborealis huddled together under a couple of trees. She dove down to them and hurriedly explained what was going on.
Lucian jumped up immediately and Sol was a bit slower.
Sol took off faster than a lightning bolt and headed to the spot. Lucian and I followed close behind. I saw the spot where Ginger had fallen in. "She went down there!" I shouted. I motioned with my tail and Sol nodded. He dove down into the grey water and Lucian and I waited above.
Sol finally surfaced with something clamped in his

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