Creative Writing: Pax's Narrative Fiction

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:Pax’s point of view: Pax closed his eyes against the sun glancing sunlight and stood up. He woke up to his girl, a small brown haired girl with a smile that could last forever. From what Pax heard people call her, her name was Aki. “Come on Pax!” she said with a smile on her face. “its moving day! “ Pax looked up and with a quick dash to the door he stood. “heh.. If only he knew…” her words seemed soft and scared at the same time. Pax thought it was nothing and continued to stand by the door waiting for her girl to finish packing up her clothes, and his toys. Dawn came quickly. Pax didn't understand fully why the sun set but it always fascinated him. Thus getting his mind off the packing. “Pax get in the car. Mom and dad will be

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