Creative Writing: Observing Sofia

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I observed Sofia unlace her shoes and take them off. She began to do homework, she used a pencil to write her name. After she had finished her homework, she began to eat her lunch, using a fork. She began to color in a coloring book, as she turned each page carefully. Her brother abruptly came and ripped the drawing she had started to color. She showed signs of anger and sadness, although she continued to color. I was also able to observe Sofia removed her pink headband from her head and throw it on the floor. She carefully picked up her headband off the floor again using her hands.

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