Creative Writing: Mothrs Murder

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shes getting into her bathtubwhen she heres a noise. bump! bump! she thinks its her husband but then relizes it wasnt time for him to b home.she is frighted for a moment but over looks itt due to the storm.she thinks its a tree branch banging on the window. she slides in letting the warm lavnder water cascade ver her.as, the t.v is on low in the other room she doesnt hear that a serial killer has escaped from prison and is seen around her area.she doesnt har that they should lock the windows and doors.she doesnt hear to stay alert. she is laying in the tub when she heard the downstairs door openshe figured her husban left work early so she said “honey, im upstairs.”she hears footsteps coming up the stairs. then she saw him. a tall figure stading …show more content…
she alos realized how simular he looks like to the man convicted for her mothrs murder. it was her father. she began to cry in fear. when a person realizes they might be drowning, there’s often a large amount of panic. This leads to rapid movements and expending a lot of energy, which consumes more oxygen. At the same time, if the person remains underwater, their body begins to accumulate carbon dioxide. This gas is what stimulates you to feel that need to breathe. Eventually, the victim involuntarily draws in breath. When water reaches the airway, the first response is to cough or swallow the water. This typically results in more water being ingested. As water contacts the lower airways, the throat spasms, trying to seal off the path to the lungs. With nowhere else to go, water frequently finds its way into the stomach. The throat relaxes after the person becomes unconscious. The relaxation allows water to flow into the lungs. she doesnt remember traveling the world. she doesnt remember her serial killer father or her murdered mother. she didnt remember getting forcd to camp. what she remembered was her sitting in the hospital room crying. she was sitting next to her grandmother with caner. her grandmother is raving about not to ry cuz she was fine thats she has done her time. she was laying in bed and all she could

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