Creative Writing: Middle School

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Everything was perfect; we were on cloud 9, I had finally found someone who made me feel like I’m on top of the world… until he moved. The excitement I felt while I walked to class was unreal. I walked through the breezeway of the school and felt a slight chill from the cold cloudy day. I quickly turned into a hall and took in the warmth from the AC and found my much anticipated class, World Geography. I walked in and there he is facing the board. Slightly long blonde hair, a grey sweater that was a little too small for him, and lanky shoulders. I cracked a smile at how adorable he was. I snap out of my trance, made my way over, and greeted him. “Hey!” I say with excitement. His green eyes lit up and his lips formed a bright smile showing …show more content…
My face turns a bright pink and I take a seat next to him. I can’t lie, this boy and I were perfect. He treated me like a princess. Every day with him was incredible, each day better than the last. I just had one problem though. I was hiding him, from my dad. I couldn’t date until I was 16 according to him. It was probably the best for me, but I didn’t care. This boy was special. We were special. I push the half-guilty thoughts away and turn to the board and listen to my teacher. I turned to look at him and he turned to look at me. I smiled sweetly but to my surprise, he guiltily looked down and turned away. He was acting weird, weirder than usual. He was distant the whole class and it seemed like he was avoiding me. He wasn’t making eye contact and he would try to get out of talking to me. My worries began to grow and the worst thoughts creep into my head. “What if he’s going to break up with you?” “What if he’s annoyed with you?” My insecurities bullied me and my thoughts get worse by the second. Class was finally over and my heart stops when his sad eyes meet …show more content…
He took my hand and led me there. My fears were calmed with the familiar touch of his rough hands. I looked at the scenery around us. The clouds seemed to have accumulated and made it darker if that’s even possible. It’s really cold, but I already feel numb from what’s about to come. A slight breeze hit my face and caused me to shiver. He turns to me, emotionless. I see a few birds flying around and I begin to envy them. They get to fly away from their problems, free from worry in the wind. Whereas I have to stand in front of the boy that makes me the happiest and listen to him tell me something I probably don’t want to

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