Creative Writing: Jane's Vital Signs

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Jane woke up in a quiet, white room, in a hospital gown and a nurse with a clipboard sitting in a chair next to her bed. Jane felt groggy, and sat up suddenly, rubbing her eyes and taking in her surroundings. “Woah, woah, don’t get up too fast, you’ll feel dizzy,” said the nurse, standing up and putting her hands on Jane’s back. The nurse was young, petite and she had long, golden brown hair that was pulled back into a ponytail.
“Is she alive? Is she ok?” Jane asked the nurse. She was referring to the woman she had attempted to save from drowning before she passed out cold on the beach.
“Who?,” the nurse replied but quickly understood who Jane was talking about. “Oh, yes all of her vital signs are stable, she is sleeping now.”
Jane was
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The nurse smiled at them, then at Jane and left the room and shut the door behind her. Both her mother and her brother said nothing for a while and they sat there in silence, only to listen to the hum of the air conditioner. Jane’s mother reached out and grabbed her hand, tears welling in her eyes and her brother sat, looking at Jane too.
“Your father would be so proud,” she whispered. Jane smiled back at her, but said nothing. She knew this was true, and it made her feel really good. Her mom brushed Jane’s straight, dark hair out of her face and gazed at
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You must be exhausted.”
And this was true, Jane was very hungry and thirsty, too. She ate everything that was in front of her in a matter of minutes, and was still hungry after she has finished, but said nothing to her mother or the nurse.
“Can I visit her? The woman?” Jane asked the nurse.
The nurse thought for a moment before saying “Yes...but only for a few moments. There is only a certain amount of visitors allowed in at a time, and her family wouldn't be pleased if we took too long.”
Jane was overjoyed, she could really meet the woman she rescued for the first time.
Jane and her mother followed the nurse into a room across the hall that was identical to Jane’s. The women was awake, and she was reading a magazine that she put down when she noticed the visitors she had.
“I'll leave you alone,” the nurse said backing out of the room.
“Hey mom could you give us a second?” Jane whispered to her mother.
Her mother nodded and shut the door behind her when she left. Jane walked slowly over to the chair next to the woman's bed. Before Jane could say anything first, the woman

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