Creative Writing: Interrupted Grace

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Three friends Grace, Abby, and Manal were having a sleepover. It was October 31 and they wanted to go to this creepy house for trick or treating. Abby told her parents that they were going trick or treating, but they weren’t. They were debating whether or not to go in. Everyone heard that when people go in they were not to come out.

“ Manal please don’t make us go in. You really want to do this.” Begged Grace and Abby. They tried to talk quietly so no one could hear them.

“ Why don’t you wanna go in it’s just a stupid old house.” Confirmed Manal.

“ Really just a stupid old house that’s it.” Gulped Abby.

“ Um…. guys lets just go in to get it over with.” Interrupted Grace.

The girls ran to the porch and just stop as a powerful wind came
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“ Ye...Yeah you are scaring….” Manal said in fear.

“Us!” Interrupted Grace.

Manal sprinted in the room and grabbed Abby. They ran out of the room, then the house. They ran as fast as a lightning bolt to Abby’s house. Ran up to her room and hid in the corner. They were gasping for air because they were running so fast.

“What happened in that room? What did you see?” Questioned Grace and Manal.

“Let me catch my breath first.” Said Abby. Five minutes past of complete silence.

“Okay someone told me to come with them it kinda looked like you Manal, but anyway we took a tour of the house and that somehow ended up in this room. Then “it” ran into the corner and came back out but it did not look the same it was scarier and darker. I guessed it was its darker side kinda like you when you are mad.” Abby told the other girls with mixed emotions.

“ Woah Woah wait a minute I don’t get mad!” Corrected Abby.

“ Yeah you do but let me finish. So, I tried telling you guys to go away because it was right there. No you guys do listen to me well, not really listen but you didn’t see what I was trying to tell you.” Said Abby.

“Really why didn’t you say anything I could have died!” yelled

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