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Insane

The gentle wind, soft and settling. The flowers dancing with the breeze. Birds sang a soft melody that was serene and soothing. The area clear except for a young woman dancing to the gentle music in her head. Every bit the girl danced, her long, white dress flowed around her, her long brown hair moving with the wind. Everything was calm and still. Suddenly, the once beautiful and lively flowers started to shrivel up and turn black, dying. The warm, soothing breeze, turned ice cold. Everything all around the girl started to turn black and die. The darkness near kept coming closer to the field. Animals that were near started to run away, but never made it far. The girl started running away from the oncoming darkness that would try to consume her for all eternity. No one could save her. The brunette ran through the thick woods, that were slowly dying. Branches fell down all around her, but he didn't let that slow her down. Soon she came to a clearing. The girl turned around and couldn't see the darkness behind her anymore. She slowed down and came to a stop in the middle of the clearing. The fair toned girl dropped to her knees, her once pure white dress now ripped, tattered and covered in dirt. Her hands gripped at the ground as she cried. Only her sobs filled throughout the clearing.
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Somebody save me." There was no one around that could save her. Then the darkness grabbed at their ankle and pulled her back. The girl fell onto her stomach and dug her nails into the dirt to stop the darkness from pulling. She flipped over onto her back and kicked at the black mass that continued to pull her back. The brunette finally got her ankle out of its grasps and took off running, the darkness close behind. Her legs screaming in pain, begging her to stop as she jumped over logs and pushing tree limbs out of her way. When she looked behind her, the darkness continued to come closer and

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