Creative Writing: Hallway

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Hallway Ring, ring, ring, [911:] 9-1-1 Emergency, what's the issue? Th-this girl she's out she's...[911]Wow, wow, wow relax honey, speak to me. There's this girl outside of my house and she keeps trying come in. [911] alright what is this girls name. Her name is-is-is Ramona Here, let me read you her bio She was raised in Cleveland, Ohio (Uh huh)Man if you hang out with her then you're doomed (yup)She followed me and my friends all over then went to lawn. I'm like who are you?Where you going? And she was like with you. Which was messed up. I said you don't get the right to follow me back to my place. But she kept following me so I quickly ran and locked the door. She keeps trying to come in I'm scared ( ok stay calm help is on the way ) hurry. …show more content…
Ah help she's coming (stay alive until the police get there) I'm trying I'm running up stairs. But she's following (through things at her) I'm trying but I feel like I'm dying she's catching up. The cops are just around the block ahh .........(hello).......(hello).......(are you there)......Meanwhile In Jacobs house ah don't do it I have a life to live an people to see and places to be. [Ramona] your going to die tonight. No no no please I have a wife and kids. Please don't kill me (Ramona) Oh I will slowly slice your chest then I will brand a cross on your right shoulder. Once I'm done I will then cut off your limbs bit by

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