Creative Writing: Freddrick Fish Finger

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Freddrick Fish Fingers It was 2:36 in the morning and Freddrick smelled burning fishsticks.He had never smelled this awful smelly smell before, for he had never burnt fishsticks in his 35 years making them at the fish fry shop.Freddrick sprang up out of bed grabbed his utility belt armed with ketchup, tarder sauce, forks and knifes. He then grabbed his cape and fish mask he made with real fish scales. He sprinted up the stares he kicked open the door stood at the top of the stares and yelled “ freddrick fish fingers away” yelled freddick in a heroic tone. “ freddrick do you have to be so loud we have neighbor you know” said freddricks mom coming from the living room. “ mom i got to go save the world ill be back” said freddrick. “ fred while your out playing superhero pick me up some eggs and some more ontiment for my rash” yelled freddricks dad …show more content…
“ but dad i gotta go save the world if theres time ill go get the eggs” said freddrick. “ and the ontimet” said freddricks dad “ and the ointment” said freddrick as he sprints towards the bus stop. The smell of burnt fish sticks is killing him as he waits for bus seven as he sits there and waits a women walks up to him. “ sonny you know the buses dont run this early right?” says the women as she walks by him. Freddrick not knowing what to do know sees a kid on a bike. Yells to the kid “ hey kid i need your bike to save the world” yelled freddrick as he ran up to the kid. The kid saw him and started to pedal faster and faster freddrick and his quick wit grabbed a knife and threw it between the tires making the bike come to a sudden stop. The bike launched the kid five yards away. Freddrick ran over, took the kinfe and bike and began to pedal towards the fish shop. When he arrives at the fish fry shop he sees a familliar tricycle, freddrick feels a sudden shock as his heart sinks into his feet. Freddrick says to

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