Creative Writing: Ella Won T Cry

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“No! You can not come with!” Brody shouted angrily stomping his foot. “ But you get to go, and all my friends are going.” Ella pleaded. “ Woah, woah, woah. Whats all the shouting for? World peace remember?” Billy said calmly as he gave small gestures that looked like minny air high fives to the ground. “ Sorry Papa,” Ella shamefully said as she looked at the ground. “ But it’s ‘cause Brody won’t take me to the party with him.”

Okay. You may be confused, but let me sum it up for ya. Ella is Brody’s sister, and Billy is their Father. Ella has always been hard to control and almost never gets along with Brody. Ella always wears dresses, but they must have nature on them. She says it brings out her dark blue eyes and long, brown, curly hair. She always has in the butterfly pin her mother gave her when she died. Brody on the other hand is usually pretty nice. He also has brown curly hair, but is very persistent with his monthly hair trimming. He loves to wear Nike shorts with Under Armour shirts. Ella tries to tell him they don’t match with the new fasion, but he won’t listen. He has bright green eyes, and he makes them pop with the black sweatshirts he wears. They live in a decent size, light blue house. The house has white trim around all 5 windows, and big, brown shingles on the roof. Their house is just a little ways into the woods,
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Doing so sparked a loud yell from the other kids. Her brother finally makes it in with all the bags and all his football buddies crowd around him. Ella already started showing her friends her new Instagram photos. Later, about three hours later, Hanz (the boy hosting the party) announced, “ Everyone! I need your attention! Now, ladies, change into your pj’s and guys do whatever. All the rooms upstairs are reserved for the women. The ones downstairs, for the men. Any questions?” A small girl with short blond hair, (Ella’s best friend) raised her hand, hesitating at

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