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Death Valley

“Look!, an old, abandoned campsite,” I yelled,”I hope it's not just a mirage,” she thought. “I see it!” Jenny gasped. “there might be food there, or maybe someone to rescue us!” we walked over there and saw nothing but some old, gross alligator jerky. Jenny wasn’t so pleased.
“if you want to survive, you have to eat it,” I told jenny. “ugh, it’s all sticky” gina said, Jenny gagged, “uhg, it tastes horrible.”
“well would you rather die?” I asked. “huuhhhh, whatever,” Jenny sighed. “hey who dat?!” a man’s voice shouted. “*gasp*, did you hear that?”, I whispered
Someone was here.
“hey who're you and why’re you eat’n my trash?!” Jenny spit out
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“oh I’m just enjoy’n the view” the man said.
“he’s crazy,” jenny whispered. I told her to be quiet, but he was pretty crazy.
I asked if he could help us and he said he had an old radio, he tried contact someone but I'm pretty sure all the connections had been outdated or removed.
“I’m sorry but no one’s gonna save you bye,” the man said.
He was pretty rude about it too. I asked him if he could at least give us some food and water, so he gave us a gallon of water and a box of what he called “cheese n crackers” but when we looked in the box on our way to trying to find someone to save us, we saw they were actually flairs, I couldn't believe my eyes! He really was crazy! We shot one in the air every 15 min. or so and by the third time, someone found us! It was some people in a helicopter! We were rescued! They came down and picked us up but we told them we had to go back for the crazy man we saw, so we flew over and got him.
It turns out he was a soldier in the navy who crashed his plane in here and lost his

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