Creative Writing: Corona Del Mar High School

The only thoughts going through senior’s minds at Corona del Mar High school was prom. Rachel Montez and Bianca Cruz were just like any other high school girls. Trying to find the perfect prom dress and wondering if anyone was going to ask them. Rachel and Bianca were talking about who they wanted to ask them to prom, during their monthly lunch date at Frillio’s in the mall. They were also planning when they were going dress shopping. “I want my dress to be long and poofy, like a princess dress and a beautiful turquoise color,” Rachel described. “That sounds amazing,” Bianca said excitedly. “What do you wanted your dress to look like Bianca?” “I want mine to have a sweetheart neckline, tight in the torso but poofy at the bottom, sparkles everywhere, multilayer bottom, strapless, and a dark purple color,” Bianca smirked. “You must have thought about this for a while, you know exactly what you want,” Rachel states. “Yes I have, I want my senior prom to be perfect,” Bianca says happily. Rachel agreed. …show more content…
“OMG!! I think I want Charles to ask me 2 prom! Is that bad!?” She waited for a response from Rachel. A few minute later she heard a DING! She picked up her phone to see who it was from. It was from Charles. She was surprised, “He only messages me when we work on project together for Smith’s Class.” She mumbles to herself. She opened it and it said, “Hey, Do u remember me?” She didn’t know if she should reply or not. She texted Rachel to see if she should or not. Rachel texted back and said “You like him don’t u YES answer him!” So she slowly started to reply to Charles, “Yes, why?” After she typed the message she wanted to hit send but she couldn’t, so she saved the message for