Creative Writing: Breaking The Blood Trail

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Rachel tapped her radio and replied “There is a body in the bathroom, we followed the blood trail and it lead to the window in the back of Mark’s shop.”
The next voice that was voiced came from someone both Rachel and Rebecca knew, their Captain, “Understood Sargent, now get back here with your military backup.”
“Captain shouldn’t secure the body and see where the blood trail is heading.” Rachel questions, ready for the inevitable responds.
“Negative Sargent, it is getting too dark, alongside we had two patrols disappear.” With this news Rachel looked at Rebecca, she could tell how she felt. Rachel thought about it for a few seconds. “How could two patrols just disappear?” Before she could continue that thought Rebecca tapped her radio,
“We understand Captain, we are on our way back to the barn.”
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Looking out the window, Rachel saw the sky was starting to become a darker blue. The wind also seemed as though it was going to pick up, meaning the one thing Rachel did not like a windy night. It took five minutes to get back to the police station, as Rachel stepped out of the police car, she could tell she was ready to go home. And judging by the looks of the three others they were also ready. Rachel felt a vibration from her right pocket, she reached into the pocket and took out her cell phone, after keying in the pass number she could see that number came from her kid sister. As she hit the accept the phone call she

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