Creative Writing: Alex's Cabin

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“I thought maybe you weren’t going to make it on time.” “Collin.” She says, recognizing his voice. “We don’t use names here,” Donovan says, in a hushed tone. “In fact, you probably shouldn’t talk at all. And keep that mask on.”
Alex looks past Collin into a sea of tuxedos and evening gowns. Then turns looking over the room. There are three large rooms. You can see into each as they are only separated by glass walls. Large iron chandeliers hang from high stone ceilings. Comfortable looking couches and chaise lounges are scattered around, along with a long bar that snakes through two of the rooms. Each section of the bar is manned by a single female bartender in a black mask and black see - through dress.
The two outside glass rooms face
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What the hell kind of show are we about to see. Donovan notices the frightened look on her face. “It’s member’s night tonight, we do it every month. She volunteered, actually, she begged, to be on display tonight. You’ll see. Just watch.” He whispers to her, while licking the soft skin below her ear. Then Collin’s voice rings out loud and clear, “everyone willing, please leave your token.”
Almost every man and some women walk up to a bartender and give the cloth from his or her pocket. Donovan and Collin are among the few who do not. Alex watches as all the bartenders take the tokens into the center room to the naked woman, where they dump them on the bed.
That’s when it becomes obvious that the woman can’t see out of her mask. She runs her hands over each token and inspects them with her other senses. Then she holds one up in the air. Collin re-enters the room. He looks at the cloth, then comes back out, walking straight to a man dressed all in black in the next room. The man follows Collin back to the central room where the woman sits on the bed. Suddenly everything is quiet. The extravagantly dressed crowd scrambles for a
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He sits on a large chaise lounge pulling her down to his lap. Her whole body stiffens in shock as she tries in vain to stand back up. She’s stuck perched on his lap, his arms braced across her lap holding her there.
“Stay still, Alex.” He points to the glass room in front of them. “It’s about to start.” “What’s going on,” she whispers in his ear. “Collin is going to tell us, be patient.” Collin speaks again. “Exhibition of the willing rape. Volunteer gives choice to the participant.” Then Colin leaves the center room and all eyes are pointed at the naked woman and the man in black. Collin makes his way back over and sits by Donavan. They whisper in hushed tones, as Alex scans the other rooms. Some people are sitting alone, others standing in groups. There are couples lying on couches & chaises. All watch the center room with rapt attention. As if on cue, the room fills with the sound of heavy breathing. “So, I finally get my chance to have you.” The man says walking toward the bed as he strips off his jacket. The woman jumps at the sound of his voice. “What, nothing to say for yourself?” He reaches running a finger down the exposed part of her cheek. At his touch her whole body

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