Creative Writing: A Narrative Fiction

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You laid in your bed, your hair a tangled mess and your face resembling that of a zombies. You groaned as you shuffled in the bed, roughly kicking the covers away because the heat was irritating you. You sighed. The memories of the night was still fresh in your mind, replaying at every chance it got; now was no exception.

"Kian?" You stumbled into the apartment, your vision a blurry mess. "Kian." You dragged out his name in an attempt to get him to respond. You looked at the sofa and sighed. There he was curled up with a frown etched onto his face. You bent down next to him and gently removed the falling strands of his blonde hair from his eyes. As soon as you removed your hands, his eyes snapped open.

His frown quickly turned into a scowl.
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"W-who told you?"
"Jason." You dropped Kian's hand and stared at him in pure shock.
"You'd believe him over me?" You're voice had gone up a few pitches, sounding almost brittle.
"Why shouldn't
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Don't you think he's lying to you now?"
"Why would he lie to me about you?!" He shouted, causing you to flinch. Your fingers tightened around his wrist.
"Please trust me." You whispered, tugging him closer. You could see him melting, he was so close to you; you slowly reached out and linked your arms around his neck, breathing in his musky scent which still attracted you to him since you first met him.
"Stop." He said.
"What?"
"I'm sorry."
"For what?" You asked, dumbfounded at his sudden change of demeanour.
"For cheating on you." He whispered. Your arms loosened its grip. He silently left your arms and walked towards the door at an agonisingly slow pace. Before he pulled the latch he turned back around and looked at you one last time.
"I love you." His weak voice came but his eyes told a completely different story. Something had returned; a twinkle it was that you saw. The twinkle you thought you fell in love with, the twinkle that had started to fade; until now.

With that, the door shut and you were left alone with silence. Complete and utter silence.

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A sudden ping returned you to reality. You jumped, slightly startled.

9:05am
Chimchim-
Hurry up and get ready Y/N, I'm picking you up in

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