Creative Writing: A Fictional Narrative

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“What was that?” questioned Billy,” It was loud”. “I don’t know, it sounded kind of like a gunshot”, I said quietly.
Billy and I were near a old abandoned home, and wondered if they should go see what the nose was. “ Do you think we should see what it was?” asked Billy.
“My parents said I shouldn’t go near here, but I guess. Let’s go!” I said. “Ok I’ll go first I guess”, said Billy,” This is really creepy, I don’t know about this”. “It will be fine”, I said.
The floor was really creepy and old. It made a sound almost every time you move. It startled the boys and they got more and more scared, to go thru the house but the did anyways. “I don’t want to be here let’s go back!” said Billy. “ You’ll be fine were too far now anyways”, I said,” We have to keep going.”
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“ Yea you do!”I said, “ It’ll be fun “maybe” ”.
They both stop right in there tracks! “ Do you see that?!” I whispered. “ Yes, is that a person, holding a gun?” said Billy. “ I think so, let’s go I’m scared!” I said sereously. “Well if we run he would probably hear us, and if we go slow he might see us so what do we do?” asked Billy. “Well I guess we just run for it”, I said “I Guess well on three okay!” sad Billy. “Okay,” I said “Three, Two, One, Go!” whispered Billy.
They started to run. They ran faster than they've ever ran before. When they got halfway thru the house, there were two different hallways. The boys didn’t know which one to go down, they couldn’t remember. So they choose the left

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