Cookie: A Narrative Fiction

Improved Essays
It all began with a simple phone call one night after dinner. “Joe,” my father hollered up the stairs, “it’s for you. It’s Jackie, she sounds excited.” As I came down the stairs to pick up the phone, I was not happy. I was tired and had looked forward to sleeping, not another stupid adventure with Jackie. Thirty minutes later, however, Jackie’s yellow Jeep swung into our driveway, and Jackie was leaning on the horn before the car came to a complete stop. Grabbing my coat from the couch, I walked out my front door dragging my arms like dead weight. I slowly made my way to the car gripping the door handle with little to no effort. I sat down in the seat, and before I could even close the door, and was already halfway down the street.
“Why did you interrupt
…show more content…
“No man, haven't seen her since the party started.” I didn't know what to do at that point in time.
“Evan, do you mind driving me home, I need to get out of here!” I yelled into my hockey buddy’s ear.
“Sure thing.” He slurred. I walked out to his car standing by the door waiting for Evan to stubble out the door. I knew driving with Evan wasn’t such a good idea due to the state he was in, but it was my only option. After what seemed like such a long ride compared to the drive there, we arrived to my house. I hurried out of car, and into the back door before my dad could catch me. When I got home, luckily everyone was sleeping, so I was off the hook this time. I jump in the shower getting off the smell of body odor and alcohol. As soon as the water turns off, I hear a slight knock coming from my bedroom window. I knew it was Jackie by the dainty little taps. Quickly wrapping myself in the towel, I go to open the window.
“What do you want Jackie? If you're here to take me to another shindig, I don't want to go.” I retorted quite angrily.
“I’m not Joe. I came to see if you were okay, you left the party pretty

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    “We don’t buy your coke,” Leroy scoffed back in response. Charlie walked quicker now, clearly bothered. “That isn’t for you to decide,” Charlie yelled. “You buy my heroin, my weed, my guns, my cars, my everything! You don’t get to decide to buy from someone else.…

    • 474 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    We reached at Sourdi’s home at exactly 9:00. The house looked exactly as it did in the pictures she sent home to us. We parked a little further up the street and watched the house. “I can’t believe were here.” “Me either.”…

    • 631 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Teddy Baker: The Big Defeat When I was younger I was a lanky boy in middle school, who could only dream of one day becoming an All-Star baseball player. The problem was, I could barely throw a pitch. I tried real hard to master it… trust me; I’m just not one for sports. This was the case ever since I was seven.…

    • 1712 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    That was until I found a recipe on how to make some chocolate chip cookies and said, “I can totally do this!” an hour and a half later, (yes ... I struggled) and with some guidance of my mother, a batch of cookies popped out of the oven. I was scared at first to let anybody try them because they looked quite horrid, but as soon as the first daredevil, my older brother, tried this twelve-year-old’s cookies he immediately smiled, shoved the remaining cookie into his mouth, and grabbed another two.…

    • 91 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    “You know jungle juice,” Adil said, after not getting a reaction out of Michael. “They get a large container and fill it with some cheap juice or fruit punch, then pour a bottle of this stuff in it. Gets the whole room lit up for like twenty bucks. It’s the only way people can handle this stuff.” Michael picked up the bottle and spun off the cap.…

    • 1194 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I thought that hearing my father’s voice would fill the void created by years of absence. I thought that hearing his voice would allow me to place my father on the same grand plateau as other fathers who had always been there for their children, loved their children. I snuck into the room with the technical phone and silently listened in on the conversation. I felt smart and sly as I pressed the button that put the stranger’s voice on the speakerphone. “Hah,” I thought, “he can’t hear me, but I can hear him.”…

    • 686 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    So they walked back to get their car while Logan and I packed up all our fishing gear. We got in the car and drove off to my house. We pulled into the driveway and Logan’s dad and I walked up to the front door.…

    • 1045 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The ride to the police station was tense. Eli’s muscles had tightened and his sarcastic remarks had ceased. His hands were raw and sore from the cuffs digging in. His limbs folded in and his neck was stiff Being 6’4 in a police car was the farthest thing from comfortable.…

    • 442 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I heard my scooter wheels harshly scratching against the rocky pavement. I glanced up to see a very unfamiliar place and Pearl, my best friend. I felt my stomach growl a roar of hunger calling for food as I remembered the lunch I had a lengthy and tiring 4 hours ago. I wanted to go back to Pearl’s house to play so dreadfully. We were lost and we needed to get back home, soon.…

    • 732 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Fall of Babylon “They had no business barging into the Peters’ house like that,” Charlie vented to his sister, Carol, as they sat in his large, picturesque apartment in Prague. “You are absolutely right, but were you not the one whom wrote down the address and asked the bartender to give it to Mr. Schaeffer? ” “Of course! But I didn’t think he would have the gall to show up in such a drunken state!” Charlie responded with increasing bitterness.…

    • 288 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Cookie Dough Narrative

    • 803 Words
    • 4 Pages

    “Guess what? I [her mother] translated all of our name into Nigerian!” yelled my best friend, Taylor. “Akeira, your name is ‘Ah-kee-ki-doh,’” “Haha, cookie dough, that’s funny.…

    • 803 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Have you ever wished that you just hadn’t done something you did? I definitely had. Especially one time when I got into a ton of trouble afterwards. It happened in third grade, during a week that would otherwise have been uneventful. After this experience, I knew never to purposely do things I would regret ever again.…

    • 265 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    While other teens are sleeping at 8 o’clock on a summer morning, I am walking to my godfather’s house to begin my day. When I arrive, he is waiting for me with the car door open. “Good morning hija, we are late doc they are waiting for us.” , he says. We when arrived to the office: he would turn off the car, then I would get my purse and my lunch.…

    • 640 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Wake up Eddie, wake up. It’s past nine. You’re going to be late; I hear a fading voice inside my head from far apart. As I open my eyes I see my mom shaking my body to wake me up. I checked the clock hanging on the wall and it was nine past fifteen.…

    • 736 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    My Fear Of Dogs

    • 711 Words
    • 3 Pages

    The sound of my doorbell was annoying as always. However, it didn’t matter this afternoon after the barking I’d heard a few minutes ago. Hearing the small thump of footsteps, I looked at the door, which was now open, to see my dad. “Hey, buddy! How was your first day at school?…

    • 711 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays