I do not have many suggestions for improvement. I would suggest a bit more clarity with the story telling. It was a bit hard to follow with each added layer of the problem. The transitions were not as obvious as they could have been though they were well done. The producer may consider either extended the documentary or editing out one of the topics. Just to keep from condensing so much information into a short time. That is a minor criticisms of the video which was well executed. In the future I’d like to apply similar storytelling techniques, like the foreshadowing and mood setting throughout the video. I also take away the importance of the individuals chosen to be featured during a piece. I enjoyed the video and felt well informed by the conclusion. It was well written and
I do not have many suggestions for improvement. I would suggest a bit more clarity with the story telling. It was a bit hard to follow with each added layer of the problem. The transitions were not as obvious as they could have been though they were well done. The producer may consider either extended the documentary or editing out one of the topics. Just to keep from condensing so much information into a short time. That is a minor criticisms of the video which was well executed. In the future I’d like to apply similar storytelling techniques, like the foreshadowing and mood setting throughout the video. I also take away the importance of the individuals chosen to be featured during a piece. I enjoyed the video and felt well informed by the conclusion. It was well written and