A quick hand(Unedited)
*Constructive criticism is welcomed of course. I would also like your opinion of what I could add to the story and what I could possibly take out.*
I could tell you a bunch of lies to overly dramatize this or maybe even add a few truths in between those lies for your convenience but then I wouldn't be as accurate. First I must say that if I am to believe my faith in which there I walk of has led me to do the treacherous things that I have done, then I must admit first off that I do not believe I have one. I've much rather walked in the belief of everything that is pessimistic shall prevail over life which has in return helped me cope with the lust of my urges that lay. Every act I have done that has led up to this consequence …show more content…
The records show that to indeed be true, so I myself will take it as that. I was an orphaned child before my first cries into this world. I would live in this Orphanage located in Detroit, to my displeasure I must add, until I turned 18. Most days the other children wouldn't bother me since I had gained a reputation of having a "violent temper". Though there were those few days when children would act, well like children. Those days were mostly about my parents that I would be teased about even when they were in the same predicament as me. They would say things such as , "How does it feel being a murderer?", "Did you mean to kill your mother?" "I bet there wouldn't be any couples who would want you as a child. They might end up murdered if so". I hated that place everyday that I had to wake up in it. It made the days feel longer and the nights feel even longer. The sky always seemed to be doomed to a fucking life of gloominess when I looked outside the window. Though the caregivers did try their best to make us feel as comfortable as could be I will
*Constructive criticism is welcomed of course. I would also like your opinion of what I could add to the story and what I could possibly take out.*
I could tell you a bunch of lies to overly dramatize this or maybe even add a few truths in between those lies for your convenience but then I wouldn't be as accurate. First I must say that if I am to believe my faith in which there I walk of has led me to do the treacherous things that I have done, then I must admit first off that I do not believe I have one. I've much rather walked in the belief of everything that is pessimistic shall prevail over life which has in return helped me cope with the lust of my urges that lay. Every act I have done that has led up to this consequence …show more content…
The records show that to indeed be true, so I myself will take it as that. I was an orphaned child before my first cries into this world. I would live in this Orphanage located in Detroit, to my displeasure I must add, until I turned 18. Most days the other children wouldn't bother me since I had gained a reputation of having a "violent temper". Though there were those few days when children would act, well like children. Those days were mostly about my parents that I would be teased about even when they were in the same predicament as me. They would say things such as , "How does it feel being a murderer?", "Did you mean to kill your mother?" "I bet there wouldn't be any couples who would want you as a child. They might end up murdered if so". I hated that place everyday that I had to wake up in it. It made the days feel longer and the nights feel even longer. The sky always seemed to be doomed to a fucking life of gloominess when I looked outside the window. Though the caregivers did try their best to make us feel as comfortable as could be I will