Good morning Crisanta! I like the idea that you brought up our society’s concern about conflict in the American education; that is the difference in skin color between students who are attending the same school. Actually, skin color cannot tell us anything deep inside a person’s heart or mind; it is just simply a different color than other colors existing on the earth. Unfortunately, due to segregation and discrimination, people still assume that skin color is the main factor when they want to judge someone else. And, to me, it is actually not fair. For the structure, it is smooth and makes me easy to catch up your story flow. Through your resolution, I can learn a lesson about the true value of any competition. You won because of your ability,
