Throughout the story the sense of fear is second hand and not as evident and clear as it would be if it were presently happening. For example, “Then I fell asleep, and when I woke the room was deathly cold, and I sat up with a jerk- and there were the other eyes…” this comes directly from Culwin as he recounts his story. While Culwin recounts his story he uses the words ‘when’ and ‘then’ giving the support that this has already happened to him. Wharton’s use of the past tense helps give the story a sense of security. There is a sense that the ending of Culwin’s story is predictable, however the characters have no way of knowing that the eyes he speaks of are actually his
Throughout the story the sense of fear is second hand and not as evident and clear as it would be if it were presently happening. For example, “Then I fell asleep, and when I woke the room was deathly cold, and I sat up with a jerk- and there were the other eyes…” this comes directly from Culwin as he recounts his story. While Culwin recounts his story he uses the words ‘when’ and ‘then’ giving the support that this has already happened to him. Wharton’s use of the past tense helps give the story a sense of security. There is a sense that the ending of Culwin’s story is predictable, however the characters have no way of knowing that the eyes he speaks of are actually his