I have attempted to write about the horrors of war as well as the traumatising experiences soldiers go through in surgery. I try to show the inhumane conditions of hospitals during WWI with success in my opinion however more detail can be directed into showing this rather than straight narration. The context is set well, with information being historically accurate as well as jargon being used effectively.
I have tried to be rather vague in characterising my character as I am trying to avoid categorising him. This is similar to Remarque’s style in not categorising