Commemorative Speech Outline

Today I gave the speech of presentation. Awarding my father with the best dad award. I think it was one of the easies speech we ever done. Not only was it quick and simple, but we had the choice between a formal outline and anything else we were comfortable with. I choose to do the formal outline because it seemed to work for me. Not to mentation I was writing from experience, it came naturally. I noticed I started low, so I tried to rise my voice throughout the speech. My goal for this speech was to inform the audience why he qualified for this award. I think I accomplished my goal. But for the first time ever I’m in the fence. After a speech, I would have an idea of what grade I could possible get, but for this one I’m not sure. It is not because I thought I did an awful …show more content…
I thought about bringing a picture of us to class, but I forgot to grab it this morning. The visual would have been very helpful. As I always say there is always room for improvement. Improvement wise more eye contact wouldn’t hurt, as well as speaking louder. I have improved from last time, because I feel more comfortable on the podium. While delivering this speech I felt okay, but I guess that was based on my mood not the actual speech. The strength of my speech was the first body paragraph, because it demonstrates how hard my dad work for the family. Which also make the audience understand why he is qualified for the award. When I glance at the time today, I’ve noticed I already spoke for four minutes. Thank god, I checked otherwise I probably would have went over the time limit. I could learn to enjoy this. This class truly helped me more than I thought it would. I knew it would have helped me academically, but I didn’t know it would help me personally. Now I am more comfortable to speak in public, as well as get my points