College Admissions Essay: Identity And Opportunity

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Opportunity is something I believe my generation has forsaken. Our inadequacy is no fault of our own, it’s the human condition. We were raised with everything at our fingertips and deprived of the conditioning needed prepare us for reality. With this in mind, it’s no surprise that for the first time in American history, parents do not believe that their offspring will be more successful than them. If I were given an opportunity, a golden ticket to explore the world and all it’s enigmas, I would go home. When I say home i’m not referring to my residence but rather Vietnam the birthplace of my parents. Vietnam, in my mind, holds the missing portions of my identity and will allow me to better understand myself and my parents.
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