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A loud pop echoed across the ground. A strong pain shot through my leg and extended all throughout my body, leaving me to collapse on the hard ground and scream for all it was worth.. It was a beautiful evening with a tint of a salmon color against a perfectly cloudless, blue sky. It was about 6:30 in the evening, and me, my friend Kaden, my brother Cole, my mom, and my dad were going to my school to play on the ninja course they had set up instead of a walk-a-thon.

My hands burned as I gripped poky rings that you were supposed swing across. They were almost like monkey bars except that you could swing on them and that every time you went to grab another ring the ring you were holding onto would swing you backwards. After a little work

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