For the first observation, I made significant improvements to the amount of details about the observation and the kept the words in one tense, which was past tense. I started by including the date of the observation and in addition expressing obviously the names of the clinician and client. I removed the term “stuttering disfluency” and replaced it with stuttering disorder to be more academically exact. In the objective section, I included more distinct details about the activities that the clinician and client did together. To improve the organization of the observation, I included sequencing all through the objective section, for example, first, second, and third keeping in mind the end goal and to assist the viewer from one activity to the
