Circumlocution: Too Many Unnecessary Words

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12. Churlish (adj.)
My brother was churlish when he came in my room without knocking first, which on his part was very impolite.
13. Circumlocution (n.)
Marvin was criticized by his teacher for his use of circumlocution in his paper. The teacher wrote and his paper saying that he used too many unnecessary words in order to make his paper look better/longer.
14. Circumnavigation (v.)
Mark is planning on circumnavigating around the world in 180 days. He is going to most likely sail first, then take an airplane while traveling around the world.
15. Deciduous (adj.)
My 6 month old baby's deciduous teeth are already starting to fall out. He's new teeth will be long-lasting.
16. Deleterious (adj.)
Alvin needs to stop smoking cigarettes because it’s

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