In 2009 my cousins moved to Africa as missionaries. They have been missionaries for about eight years now. I miss them a lot because they only come back every 2 years. They are coming back for good in May 2018. The most recent time they came back My cousin Jonas and I Went chipmunk hunting on the back of my grandparent’s deck. I caught the whiff of a skunk right when I stepped out of the car at my grandparents house, I caught a glimpse of something moving in the trees, Then a twig snapped.(Specific Details For Effect)
Drake - Looks like we have chipmunks. Lots of them.
Jonas - You bet there is.
Then he gave me one of those we-gotta-kill-a lot-of-chipmunks-look.
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Jonas - Look, there is a chipmunk sitting on that log. …show more content…
Oh, I see it.(Repetition For Effect)
Both - 3 2 1…
BANG, that was our first chipmunk, but not our last.
I missed a couple and so did he, but then we readjusted our sights and got back to kill walloping chipmunks.
Jonas - That was the tenth one in an hour. After about an Hour and a half we had 14 chipmunks and 1 squirrel. The squirrel took five shots to kill. That is one gargantuan chipmunk. I hollered as loud as I could because I felt pumped, and then I thought about how good we did that day.
Drake - Wow, That is a lot of chipmunks.
Jonas - you’re right, we killed a plethora of chipmunks.
We got so pumped we had my grandma take a picture of me and Jonas with the 14 chipmunks and 1 squirrel. My grandma said if we kept shooting chipmunks there would be a chipmunk decrease.(Humor) We laughed an hooted and hollered. Jonas and I Had gotten exceedingly tired from shooting gobs of chipmunks. I thought we should watch a movie. He agreed to that idea. When Jonas and I were watching a movie I dozed off somehow. I woke up to Jonas telling calling my name for some odd reason.
Jonas - Get up Drake ……. Drake, GET UP
Drake - What, What do you want
Jonas - There is a chipmunk
Drake - Looks like we have chipmunks. Lots of them.
Jonas - You bet there is.
Then he gave me one of those we-gotta-kill-a lot-of-chipmunks-look.
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Jonas - Look, there is a chipmunk sitting on that log. …show more content…
Oh, I see it.(Repetition For Effect)
Both - 3 2 1…
BANG, that was our first chipmunk, but not our last.
I missed a couple and so did he, but then we readjusted our sights and got back to kill walloping chipmunks.
Jonas - That was the tenth one in an hour. After about an Hour and a half we had 14 chipmunks and 1 squirrel. The squirrel took five shots to kill. That is one gargantuan chipmunk. I hollered as loud as I could because I felt pumped, and then I thought about how good we did that day.
Drake - Wow, That is a lot of chipmunks.
Jonas - you’re right, we killed a plethora of chipmunks.
We got so pumped we had my grandma take a picture of me and Jonas with the 14 chipmunks and 1 squirrel. My grandma said if we kept shooting chipmunks there would be a chipmunk decrease.(Humor) We laughed an hooted and hollered. Jonas and I Had gotten exceedingly tired from shooting gobs of chipmunks. I thought we should watch a movie. He agreed to that idea. When Jonas and I were watching a movie I dozed off somehow. I woke up to Jonas telling calling my name for some odd reason.
Jonas - Get up Drake ……. Drake, GET UP
Drake - What, What do you want
Jonas - There is a chipmunk