Chelsea Rathburn Sixteen Poem Analysis

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More traditionally poetry is used to share details of a poet’s thoughts, emotions

and views on different things that he or she has experienced. The author of the poem

“Sixteen”, Chelsea Rathburn, seems be using it to share experiences she has had

facing motherhood as a single parent but Chelsea then explains that it is a persona,

kind of like a fictional narrative. Chelsea is a creative writing professor at Young Harris

Collage and is marred to James Davis May. Together the couple had a child named

Adelyn; it is very simple to assume that she has the experiences in the poem, since it is

about a daughter and a mother just like her and her daughter, but when interviewed

Chelsea explains otherwise. When asked “Who influenced you and how
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This is something that allows us to connect directly to the poem since it is a

very common concept for a week bond between parent and teenager.

The last and most emphasised element is the repetition used in the last line of the

sonnet and how it connects directly to the title. “pray for rain, for seven, for seventeen.”

draws attention to another big concept, also enforced by allusions and symbolism. The

portion “seven” is repeated which allows us to realize the significance of the numbers in

the poem. When you are 17 you are viewed legally as a minor, still under the authority

of your parents and still not an adult; eighteen is the year that you finally become a legal

adult. When the author is saying she wishes for 17 she is making a connection to the

fact that she wishes the character was still a “kid” and not an adult. This allows us to

see that the problem the mother is facing is that her child is no longer a child; that the

child no longer wants her mother’s help but the mother is not ready to let go. This

connects to how the mother sees her daughter; as shown before she sees her

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