Cheetahs: A Fictional Narrative

It was a beautiful outside. I put my old shoes on and went out. The shoes that I had were falling apart. I told my mom to get me new ones.
She said, “ You don’t need new ones, the ones you have are perfectly fine. I replied angrily, “I have rips on the side of them. For crying out loud, you can see my feet!”
My mom wouldn’t get me new shoes so I just put duct tape on them. I went outside to shoot hoops when I heard something.
“Ryan, come over here,”called Brandon.
I ran as fast as a cheetah to Brandon.
“What do you want,” I said. “ Dude, I found this abandoned building in the woods,” said Brandon. “Really, what did it look like?” I said. Brandon replied, “It was tall with windows. The building looked like it had been there for many years because it was a greyish, black color.” I said, “What is it about this building that you wanted to tell me?” “Well, I wanted to know if you were interested in going in the building”, explained Brandon. I replied, “ I don’t know, let me think about that. Anyways, I have …show more content…
I went up to my room and laid on my bed. I stared at the ceiling. I thought I would go. You only live once right? The next day at school we talked about it.
“Brandon, I will go. In order to do this right we have to plan this out,” I said. Brandon exclaimed, “ We should go to your house and have a sleep over. We should leave during the middle of the night when your parents are sleeping.” I replied, “Alright, we have to do this quickly and not make any sounds. I guess I will see you later tonight?” Ryan asked, “ I guess I will see you then.”
Brandon came over around eight o’clock. We ate pizza, played video games and waited till my parents went to bed. Around eleven thirty my parents went to sleep. We cleaned everything up and made it look like Brandon and I were sleeping. We brought a flashlight and some tools. The tools were in case the building was locked. It took us about ten minutes to get to the