Cedar Point Narrative

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My first time at Cedar Point

It was June 6th, 2016, the end of my eighth-grade year at TKMS, I woke up, at 5:30, jumped out of bed, got dressed, ate, and yelled at my mom to get in the car, all by 6:20. But of course we weren’t even close to ready, and we didn’t even need to leave until 7:30. So after reluctantly going back inside, to pack a spare pair of clothes, sunscreen, and our tickets (which we almost forgot), we were finally ready to go and it was already 7:40,
“MOM!!!” I yelled panicking, “WE’RE GONNA BE LATE!!!”
“We’re fine,” my mom said, “now calm down and say goodbye.”

After we had left, and we were on the road, it was almost 8:00. I was not going to be late, to one of the best times of my
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Siekman, my best friends Charlee and Montserrat, and a few parents that my mom knew. We started off with Cork Screw, and the Mine ride, which were both super fun and a good start, and each ride we did, slowly got bigger and bigger, and better and better, except for Blue Streak, which is the oldest coaster in the park, and I thought I was going to fall out. But other than that we had a great time, I had chicken strips, tacos, and fries for lunch and Mom had a giant wrap and fries. Then we split a steaming hot “Valraven” funnel cake, which had piles of chocolate and vanilla ice cream, hot fudge sauce, chocolate and caramel sauce that melted in your mouth, and TONS of powdered sugar, the whole thing was big enough for four people, and we finished it …show more content…
Then the third gate was the worst, who could hear people screaming their heads off, and feel the ground shake like there was an earthquake, and it was our turn next!!! I was TERRIFIED, Claire had fingernail marks in her arm, and as our cart emptied of the people before us, I got light headed, I vaguely remember getting in and buckled. I started to take deep breaths I was starting to feel better when I felt how secure the harnesses were. But then we started to move, at first it was okay, slow and easy going around the first corner, but then I saw the unbelievable hill that was 170 ft tall, this ride brakes 7 different records in the world and one is it’s got the longest drop for a wing coaster!!!

Slowly climbing to the top, felt longer than the car ride! But then when we got to the top, we paused, getting a great view of Sandusky Ohio. Then creeping forwards all I was was the ground, I couldn’t even see the track...then ZOOM!!!! We started to fall and twist and jerk, and all I did was scream, at the top of my lungs,
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!”, all I could hear was Claire, my mom, and my uncle laughing their heads off at me, but I didn’t care, it felt good. By the time I was finally able to open my eyes, we were going through the second gate, and I thought I was going to hit my head, so I ducked, and so did everyone else. And just like that,

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