When we began discussing ideas for our cause-effect essays, I immediately knew what I wanted to write. The past few years I have had to grow up a lot, and I always seem to get questioned about it. Acquaintances are always asking, “How did you turn into such a responsible young lady?” I wanted to explain the answer to that question through my essay. However, my essay was lacking. The introduction was ineffective, and my narrative caused very few to want to read it. Mechanically it was sound; I had only one comma splice in the whole paper. However, in hindsight, I see it as my weakest paper because of the content. If I were to do it all over again, I would choose a different topic. This cause-effect may just be too personal for me to write about
