Carnal Retribution: A Short Story

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Carnal Retribution

Chapter.1: Is that you Chicken-wuss?!

"M-master?"

"Hmm?"

"May I have permission to speak freely?"

"What?"

"Well... I don't know if you're aware, but today's my last day. I'm going to be released and debt free." Said a beautiful Redhead with bright blue eyes and a slender build. He knelt on the floor rubbing their masters' foot passionately.

"Oh..You're being released? I just thought it was my last day with you until the break period ended." Said a tall blond man with creamy green eyes who grabbed the redhead off the floor and onto his lap. "Well since today is your last, I'm gonna make sure you never forget me. We have all the time in the world until we have to go. So please me, pet." The redhead silently nodded
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He greeted the doorman with a smirk, walking toward a nearby elevator and punching in a code. The door immediately opened, and he rode it to the third floor. When they arrived at the counter the secretary welcomed him. "Mr.Almasy, we've been expecting you. We hoped you enjoyed renting one of out finest servants. Would you be interested in renting or buying another?" The small black hair woman asked. He simply nodded and she handed him a large binder full of available servants to pick from. The redhead that was with him gave him one last kiss and waved goodbye to leave Seifer to browse the catalog. It had everything one needed to know about the servants: pictures, blood type, favorite foods, personalities, kinks, skills, weight, height, piercings, and hobbies. Seifer never really cared about any of that because he knew with his charm that he could get anyone to do whatever he wanted. His eyes glanced passed some of the profiles until one completely shocked him. He froze, mouth agape, staring at the picture and name below him. Zell Dincht. 'What the hell is he doing in a place like this?' he thought. Practically running up to the counter he startled the secretary. "Him! How much is he?! I want to buy him?!" Asking louder than he meant to, making him look rather …show more content…
They proceed to the assigned room for check ins. "Name and ID number?" The clerk asked Elyse first. "Elyse Donovan. 621985." The vixen handed over her ID card to the clerk. They started typing away at the computer with an amazing speed. "Okay Elyse you're being rented for three days and you will be staying with him at his residence. He'll be picking you up later today." The clerk then directed her eyes to Zell. "Zell Dincht. 782589." He handed the clerk his ID card. "Okay Dincht. It seems you're being rented for the max amount of time, which is six months. Please remember that Mr. Macari has granted you freedom. Surely don't want to be punished again after last time. So do behave this time." Zell's mind came to a halt when he heard the amount of time we would be spending with his new renter. This would be the first time in eight months that he would be rented for longer than a month, not since the incident. 'Six months?! I can't..I can't... Not again. Please not again' his mind screamed. The room was starting to spin and his chest felt like was staring to close in on itself. His breathing started rushed until a soft hand on his back pulled him from his thoughts. It was his best friend. She rubbed his back in mini circles; murmuring soft words of comfort trying to calm him in the best way she could. He tried to speak, but his voice felt dry. He swallowed hard and tried

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