Cargo Boat Descriptive Writing

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Panting, I run toward the unmistakable sound of a cargo boat. Once I finally reached the shore my greatest wish came true, a boat finally came close enough to the island I marooned on two years ago when my plane crashed into the Atlantic Ocean. I was flying with my brother when we hit the water and I think I was the only survivor, I don’t know. The boat is about seven hundred feet of the shore. Relying on instinct I scream at the top of my screechy lungs, but soon find out that that won’t work so I go to my second option ad try to light a fire using two dry sticks and after a while I see a spark and once it grows into a full blown bonfire I see the ship turning towards me and I am overjoyed. Finally on the plane home to my home in Louisville, Kentucky I am as …show more content…
Two hours later I come up short dying of thirst sitting in a wide willow tree for the fear of the unknown below. I decide to try one last time to find food or water. I start my trek with a sharp rock and a leaf for the off chance I will find water. Thirty minutes in I realize everything is look in familiar and I have been going in circles and I break off of the area of the island I know and head left instead of right like in used to. Dew I see dew on the trees and I am delighted because I learned in school that dew comes from moisture and moisture means water. In pure adrenalin I start running and ignore my water craving body. I run for about five minutes and I haven’t found anything yet, but I keep going but soon find out that I don’t feel the dew anymore and head back desperate for liquid when I start to recognize the trees and the dew I head in a different direction and in ten minutes I found a pond of water and I plunge into the murky after I just lay there for twenty minutes thinking I might survive for a while. The feeling of the lukewarm water wakes my up for my dream. I sit up and I look out side the foggy window and its

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