Candidature Thesis Statement

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I know only too well the pitfalls and problems that you may encounter when submitting your dissertation or thesis in support of your candidature. Perhaps writing late into the evening, returning back to your digs after a long journey from meeting friends or family, it's not rocket science, you are tired and the dreaded error will find its way into your text. Its normal you are a human being void of perfection, so a second pair of eyes is the solution, eyes that have been trained over many years of proofreading to give your work a thorough grilling so to

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