Bridge Descriptive Writing

On the comfortable seat of the boat, I could see the thousands of barn swallows in the distance. I could hear the roar of the 1400 horsepower engine of the boat, the feeling of the humid air around the docks, and the scent of the hotdog stand up on the sidewalk. I was on the boat with my mom, dad, aunt, brother and sister, and my cousins. It was in the heat of the summer at the hottest part of the day in the Wisconsin Dells. The driver was spinning the boat around and doing what he called a, “power stop", and water was splashing in. He said he had a surprise stop for us. A little while later we go to the docks for our stop, and I was so excited.
As we parked the boat on the docks, I was looking into the dark, narrow, canyon like rock formation. Everyone got off the boat and stood …show more content…
After the guides little speech of rules, we all made our way off the deck and onto the damp bridge that lead over and into the gorge. I was so excited yet also trembling for what might be coming. I was now a little scared for what may be coming out of the canyon of death.
As I walked up to it, I could feel the humid air rushing out of the narrow canyon. The breeze rushing out gave me the chills because I was soaking wet. The bridge pathway was very narrow. I walked slowly and carefully as the bridge creaked and made strange noises. As I looked below me under the bridge, there were streams running twenty feet below. There were also whirlpools that looked like they could form a tsunami at any second. I looked above me, there were oak and maple trees forming a canopy, which blocked out all of the sunlight. As I looked around, I couldn't stop thinking of how beautiful the scene was. As amazing as the sights were, I couldn't wait to see what was in the opening ahead
There was a large cement platform over the small stream of water that had some interesting things on it. The exit of the gorge was wide open and had a little more sunlight. As