Brendon's Breathing: A Narrative Fiction

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The rest the car way was silence. EXCEPT for Brendon breathing. "Stop breathing on me." Dalla complains for the tenth time already.

"I'm not.I'm breathing on the window." Brendon corrects Dalla.

"I'm about to put your ass out." Dalla snaps. (Damn son your panties are in a twist?)

After that Brendon just sat down with his arms crossed; he's acting like a five year old....... Wait when is he not?

What seems like forever Brendon, Dalla, and Ryan made it home. Luckily they're not dead, or at lease Brendon....

"YAY HOME! Brendon shouted at the top of his lunges, he got out the car and rolled his way towards the door.

"Brendon it's 12 at nigh, Please be quite. Also get up!" Dalla sibilant at Brendon. Brendon got up and waited fir the
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"Hey who is singing in their?" She heard her sister Lilly curiously wonders.

Dalla was leaning against the door until she went to far and the door opened. She feel on her side.

"Dalla?" Dalla shook off her daydream and stood up.

"Uh...I...Was...Waiting...to...use...the...bathroom." Dalla trailed off, she was trying to mixs up her words,but I don't think that went to far.

"Oh,Okay, goodnight." Ryan patted Dalla's head and headed out.

Lilly just stood there trying to laugh. Dalla sighed out. " You can go ahead and laugh." Dalla went in her room in humiliation.
Lilly followed closely behind. "Dalla don't be ashamed." Lilly sat down on the bed. "Look, I even was trying not to freak out, so don't worry." Lilly truthfully explained.

Dalla felt a little better. "Okay, thanks." Dalla says smiling a litte.

"Okay, well I'm going to sleep, again and dream about Pete Wentz." Lilly advance her way out, Dalla just laugh not out loud and just rolled her eyes- not in a rude way.

Dalla lied down. She was sleeping when she heard the door creaking opened. She jumped a little not knowing what it was.

She felt something on her cheeks. "Goodnight, Dalla." she heard someone said.

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