Character Objective:
The protagonist in my story is a depressed and anxious girl named Yuki and her objective in the story is to regain her family.
Scene Breakdown:
Each chapter in the story builds off one another by answering a question and providing important information about what happened in the previous chapter. I tried to end every chapter with a cliffhanger that could be answered in the next chapter. Without the story stalling, I also tried to make sure that each chapter would get the protagonist closer to her goal by either providing backstory, or time change and/ or location swap with each event.
Chapter 1 introduces the two main characters, Yuki, the protagonist, and Shin the antagonist/killer, and their relationship. …show more content…
The killer starts to become bold and starts to hunt Yuki. Yuki and Kai discover that the killer is working on some type of time crunch. Yuki visits the cult and decides to visit her old home. There she and the killer have their first encounter. The killer tries to take her but Yuki is saved by Kai. Yuki sees the killers face and realizes it's her brother. The chapter ends with Yuki having a breakdown when she discovers she will have to choose between her brother and helping …show more content…
Shin confronts Yuki and tries to convince her to sacrifice herself for the gods. His last sacrifice needs to be freely given. Yuki struggles with this new personality of her brother. She wants to be with him but also wants to save Amelia. Amelia, seeing that Yuki is unstable tries to convince her to leave and let the police handle it. Shin gets angry and attacks Amelia, Yuki defends her and Shin are mortally wounded. As he lay dying he still tries to convince Yuki to join him. Not able to handle what she did Yuki kills herself, completing the ritual and opening a portal. Kai rushes into the building and discovers the dead body of Yuki and Shin with Amelia crying over them. The chapter ends with Kai dragging Amelia out of the building and a portal engulfing