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"Good morning boss", Andy said to Jack as Jack walked into the building. Jack put a fake smile on his face and greeted Andy a good morning as well. Jack walked into his office and looked out the window. He thought to himself "Will life ever change?" Jack from the outside didn 't look like he had much to complain about. He owned a business at age twenty-seven. He was very successful in this business as well. Money wasn 't the issue. His personal life was where he did. Jack married the love of his life straight out of college. They lived happily for three years, when one night,she just disappeared. There were no accounts of her in any state or country on earth. He knew she didn 't leave him because she didn 't go anywhere. For the past two years Jack …show more content…
They passed what was known as death. These were rogue elves that had ventured into the swamps of Tenebris and become infected back in the ancient times. They were basically zombies in Jack 's world. Once they reached the Elder Forest they were forced to leave all their weapons behind. According to the leaders, there was a town in the middle of this forest that was told to be home of many Elders. There was a spell that is believed to protect the Elders from all who intend harm. The groups was able to make it through the forest without any obstacles. They made it to the town and they were surprised to find nothing. Every house, every store, everything was empty. A member of the group suggested they go and see Prince Filius and ask for advice. They decided it was a good idea, and the group set out to find him. The Elder forest wasn 't far from prince Filius’ kingdom. All they had to do was cross one river. The group went back for their horses and went through the forests. After making past, they came upon a small, still river. It was eerie that the river was non-flowing. Paddling across the river, they made it safely. Jack felt dead after all

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