Personal Narrative: I Made A Big Mistake

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Two days ago, I made a mistake, a very big mistake. In the next few hours, as I’m typing this, a breakup could occur because of my blunders. Let’s start with the beginning of how this all happened.
It all began two days ago when a friend of mine, Steven, that lives all the way in Washington, and I, decided to collaborate. Our collaboration involved in creating a plan that would help one of our friend out, Chavez, with his online relationship. Chavez was dating a person named Dazz; at least that’s what he mainly calls her, and he met her in an online game called Vindictus. Chavez and Dazz has been both dating for a couple of months now, and he was deeply in love with her. In fact, he was in such a deep trance with her, he prioritizes her above everything else. This was issue for Steven and I, as we were both worry for his health and social development. Ever since Dazz entered into his life, he’s been doing poorly at school. He’d neglect his studies and sometimes even skip class just to search for Wi-Fi so he can speak with Dazz. It was also causing him to ignore us whenever we try to speak with him
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According to our plans, our aim was to easin up Dazz and let her know our feelings about her and how she should give Chavez more space. However, with the conversation that we initiated, the damage that Steven and I caused has escalated their relationship into a fight. After the plan going south, Steven and I decided to sleep on it and hope to see what would happen tomorrow. Yesterday was the day of being a douche. We haven’t told Chavez that we decided to add Dazz and tell her the truth and our feelings. Chavez was left clueless on what was about to occur in the next few hours of that day. Dazz would start to stray away from Chavez and he’d backfire by using foul language. This ended up causing them to fight and Steven and I stayed quiet and look at the disaster that we’d

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