Starting with “most women will agree” (1) almost halted the whole thing for me. When I see something like that I feel as if I am about to get force fed a bunch of propaganda, thankfully I stuck it out because after moving passed the opening, it really was a nice piece. The intro did however set up a good indication of things to come. The conclusion on the other hand I was quite fond of, it left the reader still asking questions while addressing others. Lecturing motherhood, as a “service to society” (4) is a beautiful declaration. It did get a slight bit preachy with the last line bringing a question of a soul into the piece, but that was my only real complaint with
Starting with “most women will agree” (1) almost halted the whole thing for me. When I see something like that I feel as if I am about to get force fed a bunch of propaganda, thankfully I stuck it out because after moving passed the opening, it really was a nice piece. The intro did however set up a good indication of things to come. The conclusion on the other hand I was quite fond of, it left the reader still asking questions while addressing others. Lecturing motherhood, as a “service to society” (4) is a beautiful declaration. It did get a slight bit preachy with the last line bringing a question of a soul into the piece, but that was my only real complaint with