Persuasive Writing Assignment
It should be compulsory to undergo behavior modification before a child grows into a destructive adult. Firstly, some of the symptoms that these incarcerated serial killers had as minors can be a great affect in terms of future deviant behavior. Secondly, if people enforced better regulation to prevent deviant types of behaviour, it could lead to a better and structured society. Lastly the outcome of counseling, behaviour modification and any other protective measures can help the economy.
To illustrate my point, one of the symptoms that has the highest percentage with behaviour is compulsive masturbation. That means 82 percent of minors under the age of 16 do this. This symptom is an example of which could be turned into something greater in the near future; in terms of crime. This could eventually lead minors to …show more content…
Prisoners actually have a nicer style of living compared to the people leaving in the slums. Which means citizens of the country have to pay money to keep these prisons running. High-tech prisons get really nice equipment, food and shelter meaning it can be expensive for people who aren’t in prison to pay. If this prevention was enforced then crime rates would decrease and it would be cheaper/better for the economy.
In conclusion, it should be compulsory to undergo behaviour modification before a child grows into a destructive adult. To restate my first point, small symptoms of deviant behaviour at a young age can be transformed into criminal activity in the future. Next, better regulation to prevent deviant behaviour can lead to an improved society. My last point is the outcome of behaviour modification can help the economy in the long run. If it was made mandatory for society to regulate the youth’s behaviour then the number of incarcerated serial killers would be decreased for future testing of personality
It should be compulsory to undergo behavior modification before a child grows into a destructive adult. Firstly, some of the symptoms that these incarcerated serial killers had as minors can be a great affect in terms of future deviant behavior. Secondly, if people enforced better regulation to prevent deviant types of behaviour, it could lead to a better and structured society. Lastly the outcome of counseling, behaviour modification and any other protective measures can help the economy.
To illustrate my point, one of the symptoms that has the highest percentage with behaviour is compulsive masturbation. That means 82 percent of minors under the age of 16 do this. This symptom is an example of which could be turned into something greater in the near future; in terms of crime. This could eventually lead minors to …show more content…
Prisoners actually have a nicer style of living compared to the people leaving in the slums. Which means citizens of the country have to pay money to keep these prisons running. High-tech prisons get really nice equipment, food and shelter meaning it can be expensive for people who aren’t in prison to pay. If this prevention was enforced then crime rates would decrease and it would be cheaper/better for the economy.
In conclusion, it should be compulsory to undergo behaviour modification before a child grows into a destructive adult. To restate my first point, small symptoms of deviant behaviour at a young age can be transformed into criminal activity in the future. Next, better regulation to prevent deviant behaviour can lead to an improved society. My last point is the outcome of behaviour modification can help the economy in the long run. If it was made mandatory for society to regulate the youth’s behaviour then the number of incarcerated serial killers would be decreased for future testing of personality