In order for your writing to be great you need to revise it multiple times till it is perfected. In order for all of us to do this is by allowing others to revise and give critical criticism over your piece of writing. As Alejandro says “even though I do proofread my work I don’t tend to revise it that much, if any.” That is true because when we want to revise and edit our own writing, we do not catch the mistake right away so instead we have a second eye take a look at it. A great advice that was given to me in high school for editing your writing was, to read each sentence at a time but back words to see if it made sense.
I understand the struggle that Alejandro is having when trying find an audience to write to. My advice to him is that before you start writing you should choose the group(s) of people you intend to read your writing. Then after you accomplish that you should gather a message that you are trying to get through the audience you choose. This will give you a great paper that will speech the designated audience you have