Beach Analysis

Sitting on the shore of a beach you would expect a lot of sand, on this beach there is a lot of rocks and small pebbles which does make it tough to walk on as I feel my shoes fill slowly with the coarse mix of sand and rock. Looking around there are many people with dogs, most off leashes. I can hear them barking at each other and doing their business on the beach with their owners just burying it in the sand. The strong odor of the seaweed is very heavy in the breeze, and it is strung all over the beach. There is so much in fact that the taste of it is stuck in my mouth, which makes my stomach turn a bit. Between the off leash dogs, the cold breeze that is constant make it a rather uncomfortable feeling.
Years of logs washing ashore have collected up and down the beach have made it possible for people to come and build chairs, forts …show more content…
I have been to many beaches in my life on many different continents and they all have many pros and cons. Up here on Whidbey Island it is tough to find anything bad anywhere, but when I really opened my eyes and I was alone I could see different this that did bother me for the negative impression of the beach. I chose the words that frame the subject in the desired way or have desired connotations. To give a honest review, and without using a picture along with the description words is all you have to describe it. Also when I go to the beach my youngest daughter always points out how the beach smells. As soon as she gets out of the car she tells me if it is going to be a good beach or a bad beach. So I had her voice in the back of my head saying “the beach smells funny”. I did also use details to support my intentions with “ the subtle rushing of water is a relaxing sound”. I don’t think anything is more relaxing that sitting on the beach with your eyes closed and just listening to the waves coming