In the article, Be Cool to the Pizza Dude by Sarah Adams from 2005, she discusses her one philosophy about life. Her philosophy is “Be cool to the pizza delivery dude; it’s good luck.” Adams’ also includes her reasons for this specific philosophy. Her first reason is “Coolness to the pizza delivery dude is a practice in humility and forgiveness.” Adams’ second reason is “Coolness to the pizza delivery dude is a practice in empathy.” Another one of her principles for this philosophy includes “Coolness to the pizza delivery dude is a practice in honor, and it reminds me to honor honest work.” Her final reason for this philosophy is “Coolness to the pizza delivery dude is a practice in equality.” Her intended audience is probably individuals/families
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She uses first person pronouns in her essay, which don’t make her argument as strong. In an essay it is not necessary to use first person pronouns such as me, or I, because since there is a name attached to the essay the reader can assume that all the opinions expressed in the essay are those of the author.
Also, something else Adams’ should stay away from doing in her essay is outright stating her points. She should have used a transition word/phrase to connect the two paragraphs/points together. If she would have used transition words/phrases it would have made the paper flow better. Instead of using transition words she stated her points, for example in the second paragraph when she said, “Principle 1:” if she would have used transition words/phrases it would have made her point more effective as well.
The essay “Be Cool to the Pizza Dude” by Sarah Adams, in the long is run well done, even though some aspects of it could be tweaked to make it sound better, or make her point stronger. Her topic and points are well thought out, and she used analogies to help her points, even though she could have used transition words/phrases, and she shouldn’t have used first person pronouns. However, this is not unusual though, most essays have some aspect that needs to be edited, even if it is
She uses first person pronouns in her essay, which don’t make her argument as strong. In an essay it is not necessary to use first person pronouns such as me, or I, because since there is a name attached to the essay the reader can assume that all the opinions expressed in the essay are those of the author.
Also, something else Adams’ should stay away from doing in her essay is outright stating her points. She should have used a transition word/phrase to connect the two paragraphs/points together. If she would have used transition words/phrases it would have made the paper flow better. Instead of using transition words she stated her points, for example in the second paragraph when she said, “Principle 1:” if she would have used transition words/phrases it would have made her point more effective as well.
The essay “Be Cool to the Pizza Dude” by Sarah Adams, in the long is run well done, even though some aspects of it could be tweaked to make it sound better, or make her point stronger. Her topic and points are well thought out, and she used analogies to help her points, even though she could have used transition words/phrases, and she shouldn’t have used first person pronouns. However, this is not unusual though, most essays have some aspect that needs to be edited, even if it is