Barbaric: A Narrative Fiction

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I was woken up by the hysteric sound of my mother yelling that had pierced through the silent night then closely followed by the sound of boots that shock the floor that had filled the silent night with the constant yelling that was rapidly approaching as the silence descended into complete chaos. It was the night I lost it all my faith, strength, feelings of emotion and compassion had all vanished into anguish. I had little to no time to react as the I jumped out of bed I was immediately put down by a force that was sure to put a hole in the ground, my face was covered, I felt like I was suffocating as I gasped for even the slightest amount of air and it seemed that the more I struggled the faster the air flew out the bag. Then suddenly my …show more content…
Over the last ten years I have called this place home, in the middle of a desert where the water dries up almost instantly the one time that it does rain on the year, were the heat leaves you in a constant state of sweating and thirst. The walls were hardly affective made out of a material covered in brown mesh and a black roof that prevented any light form entering and a window in the roof that was always covered and another window which was covered in the same black mesh. Over the past 10 years I have experienced barbaric acts as I have been isolated with those out side and I have been abandoned by those that acted like they loved me they have all abandoned me God, my family, friends and my government had all failed me and now I have my self distant from them. I have had to experience lose of time in inhumane ways I was placed in tyres and electrocuted I have been lost mentally, spiritually and I am still unsure where I …show more content…
I reached the government safe house where I was greeted by camers, family memebers, army soilders and an array of the public or cheering and in the chaotic scene I spoted my mother she was there smiling and she ran towards me and she hugged me then she busted out into tears and refused to let go of me

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