Dear Mr. Clark I read your book, Bad unicorn and it was pretty good. I liked how you added comedy and fantasy elements into the book. My favorite part was the cheeseburger moon and that made me chuckle a ton. I also liked that you took a little girl’s dream and crushed it with a man eating unicorn that can shoot fire out of her horn and burn people to a crisp. I liked that you put a magical book that only the main character could only read and it was just gibberish to other people. I suggest making the book with less characters. It was kind of hard to keep up with all of them and making the names a little shorter that also confused me. I also recommend naming the places in the book more realistically. It was kind of confusing where they were
